Monday, November 8, 2010

editing:a prose poem


the longest sentences without any punctuation spill across the page down the page across the page the reader no longer able to follow the stream of consciousness flowing from her fingers typing across the keyboard now no longer even correctin gtypiosthatseem to flowendlessless andmakethe readingevenmoreconfusing and teriblydifficulttoreadafterall and so I stopped reading and put in punctuation marks, brutally ending sentences.  Just like that.

1 comment:

Cecile said...

Typo in the word:
teriblydifficulttoreadafterall
Should be:
terriblydifficulttoreadafterall
;)

I find interesting what the eye catches, or is it the brain ?